Mechanics Of Dialogue PDF Print E-mail
Saturday, 25 March 2006

If your dialogue doesn’t follow the basic guidelines for dialogue, you risk look like an amateur. So get to know them very well.  Here they are:

1.Each time a new character speaks it is a new indented paragraph.

“I love eating out,” I said.

“Yes, it is wonderful,” he said touching his napkin to his lips.

2. When you use a tag such as “I said,” the dialogue is followed by a comma.

“I love eating out” I said, is incorrect because it is missing a comma after out.

3. If there is no tag, the dialogue ends with a period.

“I love eating out.”

“ Me too.”                       

4. If the dialogue ends in an exclamation point, the exclamation goes inside the quotation marks.

“Please let me come!” she said.

4. If there is a complete sentence before dialogue, end the sentence with a period.

             I grabbed my coat. “Let’s go.”

5. If it is not a complete sentence, and it is connected to the speech tag, you use a comma.

“Let’s go,” I said, grabbing my coat. Note that “grabbing my coat,” is not a complete sentence.

6. If in the above example you insert “as”, the sentence does not need a comma.

“Let’s go,” I said as I grabbed my coat.

            “I hate you,” she replied as she punched me in the stomach.

7. If you have a verbose character who goes on for more than one paragraph, then you shouldn’t use quotation marks at the end of the first paragraph. The second paragraph, however, should open with quotation marks.

“If the same speaker goes on for what seems like more than one paragraph, then don’t use quotations marks at the end of the first paragraph.

“However, the second paragraph should open and close with quotation marks.”

 

 

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