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The revising process is different
for every writer. Stephen King does two drafts as well as a final polish. Kurt
Vonnegut rewrote every single page in a novel several times until he got it
exactly right. As a general rule, two drafts is the bare minimum. And the more
drafts, the better your story will be. The first time, just get your story down
on the page and don’t worry if you have found exactly the right words. When it
is finished, take a couple of days off or work on a different story, so your
eyes will be fresh when you head to the second draft. Then the second and third
times around you can be critical; slash, cut and burn. Stephen King follows the
formula, “second draft equals first draft minus 10%.” Removing ten percent is a
good goal; the second draft should always be tighter and cleaner.
There are some techniques that can
make editing easier. The simplest is to read your story aloud. You will
naturally catch sentences that don’t flow, notice awkward dialogue and find
places where you need to insert commas. Another good technique is to print out
your story and highlight each character’s dialogue with a different colored
marker. Read all of one character’s lines at the same time. Ask yourself if the
tone and style of the character remain the same. Does the character highlighted
in green sound different than the one in blue? Each color should have its own
consistent and unique sound.
Now, using your trusty markers,
highlight all the narrative in one color. This is a good way to visually see
the amount and location of expository. If your marker runs dry you know you
have a huge problem. Cut out all
unnecessary narrative.
The most obvious editing technique
is to run a spell and grammar check. Your computer will of course catch
misspellings, but it will also identify sentences in the passive tense. Listen
to your computer on this one. Avoid the passive tense whenever possible.
Other things you can avoid, but
which your computer won’t catch are speech tags other than “she said,” and
adverbs ending in “ly,” such as she screamed hysterically, he walked funnily
etc. While there are some times when these two types of words are necessary,
these times are rare. Unless you must have them, take them out.
Once you have had your way with the
manuscript it is a good idea to pass it off to a trusted reader. It is amazing
what a completely different pair of eyes will pick up. In the best care
scenario, you would have a reader who is also a writer. For ideas on how to
connect with other writers, see the article called “The How’s of Writing
Group .”
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