Topic History of: Danny and the Stardust Halo
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I am currently editing the prologue, so I'll post the first chapter as it is now. Its far from finished, but I wanna know if theres anything to change.
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My trip around the Galaxy
A shivering splash of water woke the slumbering boy. "What was that?" The boys eyes opened. He saw papa with a bucket. "Its the first day of school, boy!" Papa spoke in a snarling. He dropped the bucket to the ground, and threw a a bag of clean clothes at the boy. "Now, find something to wear! " The father left. "Dang it, that was cold!" The boy said, wrapped up in his cozy blue blanket.. He picked a blue Nike shirt and some cargo shorts out of the bag, and got dressed. He put on his socks, his shoes, and his hat, and grabbed a pop tart on his way out the door. "Wait a minute, I gotta grab my book bag!" The boy stopped, did a 180 spin on the heel of his shoe, and ran back into the house.
"Baba!" Danny's younger brother tackled Danny onto the kitchen floor. "It's not funny dude! I gotta find my book bag before the bus gets-" There was a honk outside. Danny peeked through the kitchen window, and, seeing the bus, pulled his book bag out of a pile of dirty clothes, and dashed down the walkway. He hopped in the bus just as the door was closing.
"Oh, thank god!" Danny passed the trash covered floor the the very back of the bus, where he and his friends sat. "Dude, no time to comb today?" A friend said. Danny felt his hair. It was like a brown mess. "I knew I forgot something!" Danny plopped himself onto the back seat. "We got about thirty minutes before we get to school because of the new bus route, so we have some time to finish extra credit-we should at least get off to a good start this year, unlike last year." Tyler spoke. A flashback occurred to Danny.
"Urgh- I don't even want to remember." Danny pulled out his mead notebook, turned to the next clean page, and started writing. "Wait-what are you writing?" Tyler asked. "Danny replied, "I'm writing about comets. Why you ask?" Danny asked Tyler. "Why are you writing about comets?" Tyler asked, curious. "Because, a comet came around Earth on the exact day I was born. After my, father told me that, I started to learn more about astronomy and comets." Danny spoke. He continued writing about comets. Tyler looked at a part of the previous page sticking out. Part of a sketch of a comet was sticking out.
"Don't you think you're a little to obsessed with comets?" Tyler said. "Not really. Astronomers tend to learn more." Danny spoke. He continued once again on his extra credit report.
About half and hour had passed, and finally the bus arrived by the school. The doors were just being opened, and a couple kids were sitting out front. "What did you do for extra credit?" Danny curiously asked Tyler. "I didn't actually get anything done." Tyler opened his notebook to the page he was working on. There was a picture of a race car sketched onto it. "Dude, look what I got done." Danny showed Tyler two entire pages about comets, along with a sketch of one. "Show off much." Tyler said. He didn't even get through the first paragraph before Danny closed the notebook.
Danny and Tyler walked through the doorway into the school. They had about twenty minutes before the first bell rang, so they went to meet Tesla. "So, why do we have to meet Tesla now?" Tyler asked. "Because, I wanna ask her if she has my binder. Plus, you might wanna ask her for some help on your extra credit report." Danny said. "Noo way! I am not gonna ask that four eyed, big-" He saw Tesla walk around the corner, "Tesla, how nice to see you!" Tyler spoke. "Hi, Danny and T. So, Danny, heres you're binder." Tesla handed Danny his binder. "Tyler, I see you're hair is as messed up, as usual." Tyler had messed up hair, just as Danny.
The bell rang throughout the school. The trio of friends left for the gym to get there class schedule and list. "So, think were gonna get the same classes?" |
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