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First sentences! Feel free to 1 Year, 11 Months ago Karma: 0  
tear it apart in any way possible =).
im only 14 so go easy

Alex was a complete idiot. He fumbled through his lecture notes, trying to find even an inkling of the information that Mr. McLand had given. After a sigh and a moment of disappointment, Alex collected what he thought he knew about World Religions, and proceeded to write a very thorny, uninformed thesis.
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Re:First sentences! Feel free to 1 Year, 9 Months ago  
what a fabulous first sentence! Youve certainly got the knack of setting the scene. I loved it!

Wish I could do that at 43b never mind at 14!

Keep at it!

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Re:First sentences! Feel free to 1 Year, 9 Months ago  
Thanks for this information. This is a great forum.

B&B in Stratford-Upon-Avon
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Re:First sentences! Feel free to 12 Months ago  
Wonderful, really! I hope you use it in something! Where do you think the story is going to go from here?
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Re:First sentences! Feel free to 11 Months, 1 Week ago  
I don't know really lol sorry i haven't been on in forever.
btw im 15 now lol i wrote that like 4 months ago.

But yea idk what i want 2 do with it im just writing sentences when i feel inspired to.
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Re:First sentences! Feel free to 11 Months, 1 Week ago  
It was cool
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