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First sentences! Feel free to 2 Years, 3 Months ago Karma: 0  
tear it apart in any way possible =).
im only 14 so go easy

Alex was a complete idiot. He fumbled through his lecture notes, trying to find even an inkling of the information that Mr. McLand had given. After a sigh and a moment of disappointment, Alex collected what he thought he knew about World Religions, and proceeded to write a very thorny, uninformed thesis.
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