I have written and published a book, "The Comfort of Holding Your Hand" and other than family and friends I have not receive any honest critique on it. Is there any one willing to read my book of 116 pages. It can be found on lulu.com as that is where it is published (download version) it is also on Amazon.com.
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“The Comfort of Holding Your Hand” is a touching autobiography by a woman who had a special relationship with her parents, especially her stepfather. This tender story is a personal perspective of how a young woman has coped with loss yet learned to love.

Mare’s biological father passed away when she was ten. She and her siblings were devastated as they all had a close relationship with him. Her mother began to date a man shortly after their fathers passing. He and her mother fell in love and married only nine months after her fathers passing.

Though the adjustment was a difficult one, Mare came to love and respect her new father and develop even a deeper bond than she had with her biological father. She was the first of her three siblings to call him “dad”. Their relationship became one of the most important that she had in her life.

Her dad had became pivotal in reestablishing a relationship with her mother by beginning the healing that was so needed between a young woman and her mother.
Mare was heart broken when her dad was diagnosed with cancer. During his final days she helped her mother in his care giving. During this time they would reminisce of the old times together. Mare was able to say that final good bye that she was denied years earlier with her biological father.

It would mean alot to me if I received a critique from someone I dont know.
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Well, so far from your summary, your book sounds very intresting! You also had a clear emotional element that came out really well!

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