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Written by Rob Parnell   
Sunday, 18 January 2009

The Fantasy Fiction Formula


Now, most fantasy writers have been constructing their fantasy world since childhood. It grows with them; they add to it as they develop as writers until it's so real to them that writing about it feels effortless - even when they seem to have created a huge, sophisticated universe.


But if you're new to the genre, where do you start?


Many professional fantasy writers will joke about 'the formula' for good fantasy because it does exist and good fantasy authors still use it - not because they're lazy but because the fans want it - in fact insist on it!

It has been condensed thus: 'Hero, artifact, quest'. That's it. All you need to start a fantasy novel! Think Froddo, the ring and the journey to Mordor and you'll see what I mean.

I prefer something a little more organic and creative.


Get a very large sheet of paper. A3 at least - that's about 3 feet by 2 in the US. Draw an outline for your kingdom - or kingdoms. Experiment with the shape of coastlines, archipelagos and spits. Maybe put some islands around it.
Use a blue crayon or chalk to shade in the sea and draw a compass somewhere on the paper to orientate the map. Maybe a scale too: one inch equals 100 miles say.

Divide your kingdom into countries or regions - draw in the border lines.


Using different color pencils, add mountain ranges, lakes, rivers, whatever you like. Have lots of fun with this bit!
Cities normally grow up on rivers and ports - so start placing important cities and towns, farming communities, military posts etc. Start thinking about trade routes, badlands and resistance enclaves where nobody goes...
Don't forget that most fantasy is set in an entirely medieval world where technology is limited to bows and arrows, spears and fire, with a liberal sprinkling of magical swords, jewels or articles of clothing like magic capes or belts. Don't take this element too lightly.

I have known many writers who try to insert guns and flying machines into their world and are promptly asked to remove them by pedantic publishers!

Now for some writing.


Invent three major castes of inhabitants. For example: human, elven and dwarves say, or make up your own. One of the caste may be dragons if you want to be faithful to the 'formula'.
Describe the class system for each. Who's the king or the head magician, how the government of Elders work, what the peasants do, whether there are bands of mercenaries roaming the countryside, that kind of thing.
Now think of three characters for each caste - have them related for maximum impact. For instance three characters might be Princess Tumar who needs to regain the crown after her father was killed by the evil Majadon, aided by her younger brother.

Write a paragraph for every character, describing their physical appearance.


Give each of the characters an agenda that is at odds with at least two of the other characters.
Write a few pages describing the scenario you have invented.

By now you should be feeling an attachment to one or more character. Choose one to be the hero and give him or her an important quest that they must undertake to gain maturity, power or enlightenment (perhaps all three!

Next, choose a magic artifact that the character must obtain during this quest. Don't choose a book!
Then create a huge threatening situation (a war, natural disaster or magical event) in which the characters are all at risk - of losing their power, authority, self respect, lives etc. and then...
Open up a new file and write: Chapter One.

Okay, over to you!

Best regards and keep writing!
 

Rob Parnell
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Dill   |76.252.13.xxx |2009-01-21 22:40:46
Excellent article, I write Fantasy, but I had never considered this method...
I'll give it a shot.
Cass   |76.20.48.xxx |2009-01-21 23:18:52
I'm just 15 and I love writing. I've come up with an idea for fantasy but didn't
know where to go with it. This was great; it was increadibly helpful.
Cera     |68.190.16.xxx |2009-01-22 15:55:59
I love to write fiction and fantasy. I usually have a hard time getting started,
but this article has helped tremendously. Thank you so much.
Kate   |71.104.37.xxx |2009-01-25 00:54:40
i just started writing a fantasy and this helped a lot. thanks
Chris   |94.71.49.xxx |2009-01-25 17:10:07
nice guide thank you
Duarte   |83.77.218.xxx |2009-01-25 18:48:53
Amazing...I have been making up my own worlds for quite a long time(I'm only 14
1/2 though), and have considered starting to write. I wandered into this site by
accident, and was delighted to see all these steps having already been
performed. I'm on the right track!. One question though: I have a completely
mythical world with 3 continents, each with its own ecosystem and about 4-8
Races per continent. Is that too much?
Deborah Owen  - Mythical world with 3 continents     |68.157.203.xxx |2009-03-21 02:25:38
Hi Duarte

Your question is a good one. Basicly, you're asking how much is too
much.> A 2,000 word story can hold two main characters and two supporting
characters. You will have time to develop the two main characters in 3-D and the
two supporting characters in 2-D (not as deep). You can have as many ecosystems
and continents as you want, but the conflict will come down to one of five
things: man against man, man against nature, man against society, man against
self, or man against machine (alien, or whatever). If I can help in any other
way, please feel free to write.
Deborah
Owen
http://www.creativewritinginstitute.com
CEO & Founder
Creative Writing
Institute
Anonymous   |65.188.175.xxx |2009-04-25 23:32:24
Im thinking of writing a fantasy book and I need to know how many pages it
should have
Deborah Owen  - The Fantasy Fiction Formula     |24.13.31.xxx |2009-04-25 23:58:35
Novels have between 40,000 and 160,000 words. The norm is around 80,000 -
100,000.
Anonymous   |65.188.175.xxx |2009-04-26 00:29:36
ok thanks
Anonymous   |65.188.175.xxx |2009-04-26 00:32:24
And one more thing if i have something in microsoft word is there a way to see
how many words are in it
Deborah Owen  - The Fantasy Fiction Formula     |24.13.31.xxx |2009-04-26 00:44:42
Yes. Click on Tools at the top of Word and you will see "Word Count"
there.
Deborah Owen  - Fantasy Fiction Formula     |24.13.31.xxx |2009-04-26 00:45:57
Oops. I forgot to tell you to highlight the words first. You can do that by
going to Edit, then Select All. Then go to Tools and Word Count.
Bea  - WOWWWW   |204.112.125.xxx |2009-01-27 18:09:36
I write fantasy/fiction. and i'm stuck in my book right now. this is my first
book. i've written many short stories and poems but i'm having problems with
dialog (how much is too much) and how much i should tell the reader... if
somebody could help me with this that would be great. you could always e-mail me
@ beatrice_babel@yahoo.com
Dar  - Helpful   |69.253.136.xxx |2009-02-02 21:47:45
Very nice, it helped me alot, especially the part about making a map.

Thanks
kiara     |206.196.141.xxx |2009-02-10 13:59:20
I have been writing my fantasy book for 2 years now, and i could never figure
out how to pull this together. . . i wanted to do everything!i had so many great
ideas but they were SO unorganized, and i gave up until recently when my teacher
asked the class to free-write. I decided to write about a dream that i had, and
when i had to read it aloud , EVERYONE loved it !!! SO i wrote more to the
dream, and it is coming out to be my book. I am so stoked to use this guide to
finish my dream! thank you so much !
Anna   |85.244.141.xxx |2009-02-14 13:43:25
I've just recently begun writting my very own fantasy book, and this guide is
going to be a huge help! This site is probably going to become my new best
friend
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